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 what makes a man hurt
« Thread Started on Apr 5, 2006, 2:40am »
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i didnt write this saw it on myspace and thought it was cewl i take no credit


What makes a man hurt.


What,
Ask you,
Makes a man hurt?
Only one thing,
The man losing something precious to him.
When a man loses something like this,
He is willing to die,
To get back what he lost.
He is willing,
To tear apart the world,
To get what he lost.
He is willing to forget,
Who he is,
To remember the feel of what he lost.
He is wiling to spend an eternity in hell,
Just to touch what he lost,
One last time.
He is willing to decapitate G-d,
Just to catch a glimpse,
Of what he lost.
He is willing to do anything,
Just to smell what he lost.
He is willing to destroy the universe,
Just to hold what he lost,
For a single second.

What makes a man hurt?

Losing the love of a woman,
Is what makes a man hurt.
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« Reply #1 on Oct 20, 2006, 11:39am »
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pretty deep dude
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