Post by Charice on Apr 8, 2006 23:22:51 GMT -5
Chapter 2: Bye
As you can see I have a great and normal life right? The life any teenager could want, I have good friends, an awesome basketball team, and a stable I love riding at! Then things started getting pretty creepy, it all started on April 13th it was a Friday and it was time for the spring Puyallup fair. Mackenzie wasn’t coming with me because she had chicken pox and because my brother and two cousins where at that boarding school thing life was perfect for me! My mom and me were having a great time!
“Hey mom I just remembered a dream that I had last night. You know how I’m going camping tonight with the stables? Well, I dreamed that we went to the fair like we are now. And I saw my friend Vanessa the one who died in a car accident last month, then we got onto the tower of terror and it broke down! Then there was an earthquake, and then the sun disappeared, and then everything with batteries stopped working, and then Raisin woke up, and it was all his dream, but then it really happened! and you know how I woke up so early? Well in my dream it was the same! Creepy huh?” I babbled. I always tell mom my dreams, because she was taking some dream anyalisis classes in college, at the time.
“Oh no not now, she isn’t ready!” Mom screamed, wide-eyed and panicked.
“What who are you talking to? Ready for what?” I asked surprised at her reaction.
“Oh…nothing just talking to myself, hmm. Weird dream.” She said, but I knew something was bugging her.
“Lets go on the Tower of Terror I am finally old enough! So I’m excited!” I screamed changing the subject.
“First get me some cotton candy,” said mom while handing me a five dollar-bill.
“Max… is that really you? Oh my gosh I have to tell you something” said a young girl.
“Vanessa? No way! Umm… Hi. Well… I got to go…see yeah!” I stammered and ran.
“Where’s my cotton cand-” mom started.
“Mom you won’t believe who I just saw!” I screamed.
“Who?” Asked mom.
“Vanessa!”
“Vanessa? Isn’t she…Didn’t she? … that’s so weird. Isn’t she the one who died in the car crash last year?” Mom whispered.
“Yeah… that’s weird… she was wearing that exact same thing when she died… I just pretended that nothing happened.” I whispered back.
“Did she look any older?”
“No!”
“It was probably just some one playing a joke… just lets forget about the whole thing, promise?” Mom whispered sternly.
“Um, well sure I guess. Ooh I know let’s go on the tower of terror.” I tried to act natural, mom knew something I didn’t. And whatever it was I didn’t look good. “And…yes we are on going up, up, up, and ahhhh up, up uuup, ahhhhhh whoa this is cool, so cool!”
“I told you whaaaaa!” Mom shrieked when it dropped, all thoughts about Vannessa totally gone.
And then, it hit the ground. The cables that are supposed to stop it just above the ground snapped. Now hold on a sec, because I’m narrating you can tell I didn’t die right? Wrong, I died so did everyone else. Two men, five woman and fourteen children. Then it was like the zoom on a camera as it zoomed back out of focuse, the dead bodies, I started to puke.
. . .
“No! I don’t believe you!” I screamed at my mother. We were… somewhere I don’t know where exactly, it wasn’t a room, but it wasn’t outside. It wasn’t realy dark, but it wasn’t really light either. We weren’t sitting on anything, but we weren’t standing. I know how to describe it it was like being underwater with a tank of air in that we could breathe, but it took a little bit of concentration. And we could move freely, but weren’t sitting down or standing, confusing I know, but I never said I was a writer. I play basketball get “A” is school ride horses plus I was the most selfish person I’d ever met. My mom had just finished telling me this:
“Max dear, listen close we only have a minute.” Mom said.
“Mom you’re, crying, where are we?!” I screamed panicked.
“Maxy don’t interrupt don’t ask questions and don’t cry. I can’t be
straight forward so here it is as plain as I’m aloud to put it. Your dead you will see your loved ones again sooner than you think. I will miss you but don’t worry about us. Fate exists. Look into the eyes of ones who cannot lie. Tricks aren’t against the rules. Lots of surprises.” Mom said, I had no clue what she was talking about.
“Mommy you’re disappearing what’s going on!” I wailed.
(talks faster)”Don’t forget the big picture. Keep your life-line. He didn’t do
this to you I did. Pen and paper cant be read by or in darkness, and remember hate, guilt natural but bad like drugs I love you!” She screamed.
“Momma! Mommy! Wait! No! I don’t want to! I love-” And then my voice stopped working. I still don’t know when I’ll see her again, but I’v bean told it will be soon. Anyway it was like on old TV shows when the picture fades to the next screen, mom started getting farther away and dimmer and I couldn’t see anything behind me. Not like when there’s a wall or a bright light there was just… nothing. I soon lost complete sight of my mom and I kept repeating what she said to me. It was riddles I hate riddles, but tried to find out what they meant. I’m dead… hmm that could mean I’m just leaving earth. Look into the eyes of ones who cannot lie? They can’t lie, who maybe babies? Or nuns or animals! That must be it so look into their eyes like… oh I don’t know moving on. Pen and paper can’t be read by or in darkness so you can’t read in the dark got it but it can’t be read by the dark, well you can read next to darkness if you have a light, eh whatever.
Okay, sorry to cut in but I can’t realy explain what happened next I just remember going in and comeing out suddenly knowing stuff.
But now I finaly understand everything that has happened! All the weird stuff you know? Okay so it turns out there is a war going on right under our noses! Between good and evil, God and Satan selfish and righteous top and- I’m rambling that happens when I’m excited. A lot of you know the story like forever and a day ago, God was up in heaven with all his buddy’s, then Lucifur (Satan) and group of angels didn’t like how things were going so they rebelled. The story goes that God won and created hell as sort of like a punishment that’s why it’s all fiery and such, but that isn’t quite true (it’s portrayed that way because of everything the bible has gone through being condensed and translated over and over again things are bound to get a little messed up) what really happened is Saten fled when he relised he hadn’t caught the Lord off guard he was really counting the element of surprise an pure anger to cloud the lord’s judgement but that didn’t happen. So he fled and hid there until about three and a half billion years later on the seventh day of creation when he struck again, it was a close battle but as you probably guessed, God prevailed.
Then after only 1,000 years there was another war. This time Satan won and got to work fast he destroyed all written history, he changed animals eating habbits so suddenly they had to travel around the world to get this new plant that they could eat! (most diden’t survive.) After a couple more stunts in trying to thouroughly destroy the world so that he could start over there was the “Ice Age” and I am sure you all know what happened there (the dinasours dieing ect.) but in 170,000 B. C. God took over again. except for a really close call in ancient Egypt about 1970 B.C. things have bean realitively quiet. Now you must understand this isn’t a war like cannons death and stuff like that (most of the time) it isn’t even what God wants or Satan wants it’s basicly what you want it’s almost a sub-consience democracy if the majority of the people are good than God is in charge. If they are bad than Satan is in charge and so normally the angels and the followers as they are titled, walk around and they give people information so that they can make there own desicens. This isn’t normal circumstances; Satan has not been playing by the rules he has been taking away peoples free will! Just making them follow him it’s horrible in the 1400 93% of the entire population was good now in 2005 only about 58% is good. So it turns out I am an angel. (My brother would disagree but that’s his problem) and my mother is also a angel. She never made it through training for reasons I don’t know yet and she isn’t even my real mom! Her job is to train the baby angels until they’re ready to furful they’re destiny. She is one of the most popular momma angels, so I guess I was lucky to have her and I knew it all along me and my brother Joe are not related! I mean seriously for my whole life if someone says is that your brother I would be like, “I’m still waiting for lab results.” My dad was normal just thingyy that’s how he got killed. Him and his swat team went in arrested the drug dealers and were supposed to leave. He was showing off to his buddies, saw some hershey’s choclate on the table and went to get some. Got shot in the back and died.
So the clues that my mom left me I understand some more of them now.
1. you will see your loved ones again sooner than you think
2. I will miss you but don’t worry about us
3. look into the eyes of ones who cannot lie
4. tricks aren’t against the rules
5. lots of surprises
6. don’t forget the big picture
7. keep your life-line
8. pen and paper cant be read by or in darkness
9. remember hate guilt natural but bad
Number 4 pretty self-explanitory and it has proved to be true on numerous ocassions.
5 has helped me be prepared. Like I said before, I'm writing this book way after my death-day five years afterward to be exact.
As for six a lot of times I get so caught up in one person I forget what I'm supposed to be doing.
7 my lifeline, is a beautiful necklace from my grandfather you see my great-grandfather died when I was six and my cat had a stroke a year later we had to put him to sleep and before he died I put I locket around his neck (it had always been his favorite.) Before my duties as an angel started I had a week to just get used to being dead. I ran into my great-grandpa who was living with said cat and he gave me that necklace said it was my life-line I still don’t know it’s purpose though.
Number 8 Satan isn’t below eavesdropping into your words and thoughts. So when I have to get a important message to someone, I write it down just like you couldn’t read this book in the dark evil or dark spirited people can’t read.
So, now that I’ve told you all the information I gathered about the riddles thoughout my five years of travel.
I’m going to skip ahead two months after my death. All that happened in that first months was research yes, research! For petes sake I’m an angel I was under the impression I would be done with school. No such luck I have to figure what KIND of angel I want to be, a priest, a police officer, a time traveler, ( you know Hitler used to be good actually trying to help with racism problem but a follower got to him! Can you believe it ?) And my last two options are: a greeter in heaven explaining all the rules to new angels, and a docter. I have decided to be a time traveler.
So, I don’t know about number 1 or 2, I still haven’t seen them yet and it’s been 5 years.
Number 3, I have no bloody idea!
And my real name is, ruhige flugel Þñåìá öôåñÜ it means little wings in Greek. Now don’t start getting all depressed for me. Sure, I’ve died left all my friends and family behind and haven’t done anything normal for five years, but if you’d been there the first time I helped someone come to God’s side. You’de have given a lifetime of memories for that.
As you can see I have a great and normal life right? The life any teenager could want, I have good friends, an awesome basketball team, and a stable I love riding at! Then things started getting pretty creepy, it all started on April 13th it was a Friday and it was time for the spring Puyallup fair. Mackenzie wasn’t coming with me because she had chicken pox and because my brother and two cousins where at that boarding school thing life was perfect for me! My mom and me were having a great time!
“Hey mom I just remembered a dream that I had last night. You know how I’m going camping tonight with the stables? Well, I dreamed that we went to the fair like we are now. And I saw my friend Vanessa the one who died in a car accident last month, then we got onto the tower of terror and it broke down! Then there was an earthquake, and then the sun disappeared, and then everything with batteries stopped working, and then Raisin woke up, and it was all his dream, but then it really happened! and you know how I woke up so early? Well in my dream it was the same! Creepy huh?” I babbled. I always tell mom my dreams, because she was taking some dream anyalisis classes in college, at the time.
“Oh no not now, she isn’t ready!” Mom screamed, wide-eyed and panicked.
“What who are you talking to? Ready for what?” I asked surprised at her reaction.
“Oh…nothing just talking to myself, hmm. Weird dream.” She said, but I knew something was bugging her.
“Lets go on the Tower of Terror I am finally old enough! So I’m excited!” I screamed changing the subject.
“First get me some cotton candy,” said mom while handing me a five dollar-bill.
“Max… is that really you? Oh my gosh I have to tell you something” said a young girl.
“Vanessa? No way! Umm… Hi. Well… I got to go…see yeah!” I stammered and ran.
“Where’s my cotton cand-” mom started.
“Mom you won’t believe who I just saw!” I screamed.
“Who?” Asked mom.
“Vanessa!”
“Vanessa? Isn’t she…Didn’t she? … that’s so weird. Isn’t she the one who died in the car crash last year?” Mom whispered.
“Yeah… that’s weird… she was wearing that exact same thing when she died… I just pretended that nothing happened.” I whispered back.
“Did she look any older?”
“No!”
“It was probably just some one playing a joke… just lets forget about the whole thing, promise?” Mom whispered sternly.
“Um, well sure I guess. Ooh I know let’s go on the tower of terror.” I tried to act natural, mom knew something I didn’t. And whatever it was I didn’t look good. “And…yes we are on going up, up, up, and ahhhh up, up uuup, ahhhhhh whoa this is cool, so cool!”
“I told you whaaaaa!” Mom shrieked when it dropped, all thoughts about Vannessa totally gone.
And then, it hit the ground. The cables that are supposed to stop it just above the ground snapped. Now hold on a sec, because I’m narrating you can tell I didn’t die right? Wrong, I died so did everyone else. Two men, five woman and fourteen children. Then it was like the zoom on a camera as it zoomed back out of focuse, the dead bodies, I started to puke.
. . .
“No! I don’t believe you!” I screamed at my mother. We were… somewhere I don’t know where exactly, it wasn’t a room, but it wasn’t outside. It wasn’t realy dark, but it wasn’t really light either. We weren’t sitting on anything, but we weren’t standing. I know how to describe it it was like being underwater with a tank of air in that we could breathe, but it took a little bit of concentration. And we could move freely, but weren’t sitting down or standing, confusing I know, but I never said I was a writer. I play basketball get “A” is school ride horses plus I was the most selfish person I’d ever met. My mom had just finished telling me this:
“Max dear, listen close we only have a minute.” Mom said.
“Mom you’re, crying, where are we?!” I screamed panicked.
“Maxy don’t interrupt don’t ask questions and don’t cry. I can’t be
straight forward so here it is as plain as I’m aloud to put it. Your dead you will see your loved ones again sooner than you think. I will miss you but don’t worry about us. Fate exists. Look into the eyes of ones who cannot lie. Tricks aren’t against the rules. Lots of surprises.” Mom said, I had no clue what she was talking about.
“Mommy you’re disappearing what’s going on!” I wailed.
(talks faster)”Don’t forget the big picture. Keep your life-line. He didn’t do
this to you I did. Pen and paper cant be read by or in darkness, and remember hate, guilt natural but bad like drugs I love you!” She screamed.
“Momma! Mommy! Wait! No! I don’t want to! I love-” And then my voice stopped working. I still don’t know when I’ll see her again, but I’v bean told it will be soon. Anyway it was like on old TV shows when the picture fades to the next screen, mom started getting farther away and dimmer and I couldn’t see anything behind me. Not like when there’s a wall or a bright light there was just… nothing. I soon lost complete sight of my mom and I kept repeating what she said to me. It was riddles I hate riddles, but tried to find out what they meant. I’m dead… hmm that could mean I’m just leaving earth. Look into the eyes of ones who cannot lie? They can’t lie, who maybe babies? Or nuns or animals! That must be it so look into their eyes like… oh I don’t know moving on. Pen and paper can’t be read by or in darkness so you can’t read in the dark got it but it can’t be read by the dark, well you can read next to darkness if you have a light, eh whatever.
Okay, sorry to cut in but I can’t realy explain what happened next I just remember going in and comeing out suddenly knowing stuff.
But now I finaly understand everything that has happened! All the weird stuff you know? Okay so it turns out there is a war going on right under our noses! Between good and evil, God and Satan selfish and righteous top and- I’m rambling that happens when I’m excited. A lot of you know the story like forever and a day ago, God was up in heaven with all his buddy’s, then Lucifur (Satan) and group of angels didn’t like how things were going so they rebelled. The story goes that God won and created hell as sort of like a punishment that’s why it’s all fiery and such, but that isn’t quite true (it’s portrayed that way because of everything the bible has gone through being condensed and translated over and over again things are bound to get a little messed up) what really happened is Saten fled when he relised he hadn’t caught the Lord off guard he was really counting the element of surprise an pure anger to cloud the lord’s judgement but that didn’t happen. So he fled and hid there until about three and a half billion years later on the seventh day of creation when he struck again, it was a close battle but as you probably guessed, God prevailed.
Then after only 1,000 years there was another war. This time Satan won and got to work fast he destroyed all written history, he changed animals eating habbits so suddenly they had to travel around the world to get this new plant that they could eat! (most diden’t survive.) After a couple more stunts in trying to thouroughly destroy the world so that he could start over there was the “Ice Age” and I am sure you all know what happened there (the dinasours dieing ect.) but in 170,000 B. C. God took over again. except for a really close call in ancient Egypt about 1970 B.C. things have bean realitively quiet. Now you must understand this isn’t a war like cannons death and stuff like that (most of the time) it isn’t even what God wants or Satan wants it’s basicly what you want it’s almost a sub-consience democracy if the majority of the people are good than God is in charge. If they are bad than Satan is in charge and so normally the angels and the followers as they are titled, walk around and they give people information so that they can make there own desicens. This isn’t normal circumstances; Satan has not been playing by the rules he has been taking away peoples free will! Just making them follow him it’s horrible in the 1400 93% of the entire population was good now in 2005 only about 58% is good. So it turns out I am an angel. (My brother would disagree but that’s his problem) and my mother is also a angel. She never made it through training for reasons I don’t know yet and she isn’t even my real mom! Her job is to train the baby angels until they’re ready to furful they’re destiny. She is one of the most popular momma angels, so I guess I was lucky to have her and I knew it all along me and my brother Joe are not related! I mean seriously for my whole life if someone says is that your brother I would be like, “I’m still waiting for lab results.” My dad was normal just thingyy that’s how he got killed. Him and his swat team went in arrested the drug dealers and were supposed to leave. He was showing off to his buddies, saw some hershey’s choclate on the table and went to get some. Got shot in the back and died.
So the clues that my mom left me I understand some more of them now.
1. you will see your loved ones again sooner than you think
2. I will miss you but don’t worry about us
3. look into the eyes of ones who cannot lie
4. tricks aren’t against the rules
5. lots of surprises
6. don’t forget the big picture
7. keep your life-line
8. pen and paper cant be read by or in darkness
9. remember hate guilt natural but bad
Number 4 pretty self-explanitory and it has proved to be true on numerous ocassions.
5 has helped me be prepared. Like I said before, I'm writing this book way after my death-day five years afterward to be exact.
As for six a lot of times I get so caught up in one person I forget what I'm supposed to be doing.
7 my lifeline, is a beautiful necklace from my grandfather you see my great-grandfather died when I was six and my cat had a stroke a year later we had to put him to sleep and before he died I put I locket around his neck (it had always been his favorite.) Before my duties as an angel started I had a week to just get used to being dead. I ran into my great-grandpa who was living with said cat and he gave me that necklace said it was my life-line I still don’t know it’s purpose though.
Number 8 Satan isn’t below eavesdropping into your words and thoughts. So when I have to get a important message to someone, I write it down just like you couldn’t read this book in the dark evil or dark spirited people can’t read.
So, now that I’ve told you all the information I gathered about the riddles thoughout my five years of travel.
I’m going to skip ahead two months after my death. All that happened in that first months was research yes, research! For petes sake I’m an angel I was under the impression I would be done with school. No such luck I have to figure what KIND of angel I want to be, a priest, a police officer, a time traveler, ( you know Hitler used to be good actually trying to help with racism problem but a follower got to him! Can you believe it ?) And my last two options are: a greeter in heaven explaining all the rules to new angels, and a docter. I have decided to be a time traveler.
So, I don’t know about number 1 or 2, I still haven’t seen them yet and it’s been 5 years.
Number 3, I have no bloody idea!
And my real name is, ruhige flugel Þñåìá öôåñÜ it means little wings in Greek. Now don’t start getting all depressed for me. Sure, I’ve died left all my friends and family behind and haven’t done anything normal for five years, but if you’d been there the first time I helped someone come to God’s side. You’de have given a lifetime of memories for that.